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Comment on Chapter Two by Chris Smith

Chris Smith — Mon, 11 May 2009 23:06:47 +0000

I’ve now read the second chapter, and I have to say that it sounds like the author. I can hear Jim actually speaking these lines and to me it makes it more believable. It follows the writing principle that the author writes the story as if writing a letter to a close friend. It’s become very compelling.

Comment on Chapter One by Ted Miller

Ted Miller — Thu, 07 May 2009 04:54:19 +0000

Not very comfortable with the father/son relationship. I have three sons and couldn’t relate to this interaction. I think the writing is quite good, but the beginning of the story seems a bit disjointed. The narrator (I’m not sure whether the Choir Boy is the portaganist) is a bit of a wimp. I think it a bit irrational that the guy only looked for work a totoal of three days before subjecting himself to a lifetime of torment. But then how does one judge a shrink?

Comment on Chapter One by Chris Smith

Chris Smith — Tue, 05 May 2009 04:17:59 +0000

I love the idea of posting chapters like this.

Thus far, the book holds my attention and I want to read more.

My only comment is the use of the “name” 1051 Charles. I understand what you are trying to accomplish though it seems odd to read. I think I am stuck on something at the bottom of page 6 in which the sentence starts: 1051s skin which seems a little odd and I think we need an apostrophe in there.

Comment on Chapter Two by Dick Hague

Dick Hague — Mon, 04 May 2009 17:24:27 +0000

I am getting interested in 1051. The interview with the psychologist’s comments is whetting my curiosity about his dilemma and what it is he has forgotten.